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Couple textual errors

Postby Hades » Fri Jun 07, 2013 8:14 pm

When my incubus uses nipple clamps, the game will intermittently refer to my incubus as a she ie. "as she applies the nipple clamps..."

And while this may not be an error per se, the action description doesn't vary regardless of whether you are applying them to nipples or cockhead, so there's no indication of where they are being used like there is for the acupuncture needles.

The horsecock description renders oddly and displays ", foot of..." where it would read better as ", a foot of..."

I have to admit I'm not generally minding my Ps and Qs while playing the game, but both of those popped out at me.
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Re: Couple textual errors

Postby jackoekaki » Sat Jun 08, 2013 12:50 am

Ah, good catch. Both fixed in the next release.
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Re: Couple textual errors

Postby fuzzywuzzy007 » Sun Aug 11, 2013 7:26 am

Rather than start a new thread, I thought I'd post here.
I'm seeing a similar message when I fail the horror check. It looks like "HIS" below should be changed to look at the gender of the person fleeing.
I've seen the message with both women and men->women trans.
Monique asks to hear more about this.
Monique's attitude changes from Conflicted to Intrigued.
More persuasion is required.
Monique jerks from Allaraea's embrace. "I thought I could handle this. I'm not so sure anymore." She pulls on his underwear. "Give me some time to think."
The session ends. (Horror meter overflowed)


EDIT:
I just wanted to say I'm really impressed with the game - keep up the good work!!
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Re: Couple textual errors

Postby jackoekaki » Sun Aug 11, 2013 7:30 am

Ah, thanks. Fixed in the next release.
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Re: Couple textual errors

Postby wanderinglecher » Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:35 pm

Little bit of awkward text here:

Norin bucks into her warm velvety softness and he unleashes strands of cum all over her breasts. Cum wells up from her cleavage as the sensation wrings a few more drops out of him. The wet mess glistens on her tits for a moment then rapidly vanishes, absorbed into her skin. Norin can't hold back his orgasm any more. Glob after glob of sticky cum erupts from his cock.



That italicized bit would work better at the start of the paragraph. I can tell that is going to be annoying to get the text to flow correctly, what with the randomization that got put in. I wish you luck working that out. Maybe it would work better keeping that paragraph outside the randomization process?
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Re: Couple textual errors

Postby jackoekaki » Fri Aug 16, 2013 10:45 am

True, the titty fuck message will override that extraneous orgasm message in the next release.
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